05-30-2009, 07:52 AM
Acharya,
Can you have someone look at it and comment?
The feedback has to be about does the story make sense? Do we lose the reader? Does it arouse curiousity to know more? Does it make the reader eager to know more?
Thanks, ramana
Can you have someone look at it and comment?
The feedback has to be about does the story make sense? Do we lose the reader? Does it arouse curiousity to know more? Does it make the reader eager to know more?
Thanks, ramana